The straight pitch video that I posted earlier didn't feel quite right for me (it was basically cribbed from sections of our business plan) so I decided to rework it from the ground up. Tell me what you think! (More video to follow shortly.)
This was posted from my iPhone...
"More than 16 Million people visit San Francisco every year, and as a guide with an offbeat, locally-owned tour company, it is my delight to bring this dynamic and always surprising city alive for a few of those people. But most tour companies run in the same tired loop from tourist trap to tourist trap, dealing "death by microphone" from double-decker buses wherever they go, and snarling the streets with traffic congestion and noise.
I think San Francisco's biggest industry needs a boost from it's fastest-growing industry - technology. San Francisco startups like Vayable and Airbnb are revolutionizing the way we find experiences and book a place to stay all while promoting entrepreneurship, cultural exchange, and community building. I want to do all that and revolutionize the way we interact with the city itself - so I founded the Urban Explorers Guild.
The guild is a community built around a donation-based game of discovery played on your smartphone. Think of it as a self-guided tour brought to life as an alternate reality game and carried in the palm of your hand. It's goal: to immerse players in the living city around them and challenge them to discover the hidden sights, oddities, and forgotten stories right under their noses. To bring San Francisco's little-known treasures to light, and to help players see its established attractions in a new light. To turn locals and tourists alike into explorers!
And that's where Kickstarter comes in. Your donations will fund the hard work of programming the backbone of the game and the high-quality artwork that will bring it to life. Rewards range from a copy of the app and a heartfelt "thank you!" to a live, immersive, alternate reality game experience for you and your friends, and there is plenty of other interesting stuff in between.
So, if you're in San Francisco, head to the Filbert Street Steps on Telegraph Hill and play our demo. If you're not, try the virtual demo on our website and remember us the next time you visit. And keep discovering!"
Thanks!